Blessings of Rain (haiku)


Pattering pearl drops

A Blessing magnanimous

Planet prosperous


Image by Charles Roussel


Restless ambitions

Drenched in amiability

Completely quenched

Big thanks to Ruchira Shukla for hosting HAIKU contest and providing the tutorial. This is my first attempt and I am waiting  eagerly for the feedback.

Written for-Write Tribe Wednesday Prompt: Haiku


13 Comments Add yours

  1. Ruch says:

    I like the second One Sheela. The first one tends to be a tad confusing and ambiguous ! Would you like to change a showering umbrella to something a little different.

    1. shellymona says:

      Thanks Ruchira…surely I will change it….
      It’s been an awesome task….got to learn something new

    2. shellymona says:

      Hi Ruchira …..hope this one suits better….thanks for guiding

  2. kalpana solsi says:

    with magnanimous blessings the Earth is bound to prosper. Nice Haiku

  3. preetilata says:

    Both the Haiku are lovely.

    1. shellymona says:

      Thanks a lot Preeti

  4. Roshni says:

    wow! I love both of them! What a great first attempt!

    1. shellymona says:

      Thanks a lot Roshni

  5. This is so beautiful 🙂

  6. vandana says:

    Rain of words drenching ……loved it

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