Seventh Heaven

We are celebrating #WriteTribe Festival of Words – a seven day blogging challenge – 1st September to 7th September 2013


The bell rang.  She froze at the door to see him back. He helped her but she was awestruck; never in her wildest dreams had she ever thought of his return.

The awe turned into The Happiness; she made him sit, went into her bedroom, draped herself in rainbow and sat in front of him.

Enthralled by the moments of his nearness she forgot her complaints. The words had no room, emotions handled the scene.

After that incident, she had never thought of such a lovely reunion. Both were near, hands in hands, heart in rhythm, lips silent, and the souls danced. Suddenly a harsh continuous sound brought her back from her seventh heaven, and she opened her eyes…

Few soulful moments are sometimes far better than the. . . . . . . Her heart smiled.


This post is written for #WriteTribe Festival of Words – Day 1

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19 Comments Add yours

  1. Usha Menon says:

    A nice take on the topic. Loved reading the poem,Sheela.

    1. shellymona says:

      Glad you loved it…thanks very much

  2. subzeroricha says:

    wow! I could almost picture each word inside my head… what a wonderful concept of seventh heaven…


    1. shellymona says:

      Where heart is at the upper position…your lovely comment is an encouragement for me…thanks Richa

  3. C. Suresh says:

    Ah! Togetherness is Heaven indeed – says the bachelor 🙂

    1. shellymona says:

      You are perfectly right….togetherness is heaven…thanks Suresh

  4. radhasawana says:

    Seventh Heaven – nice! Is the story going to continue? Excited about reading the further posts on this 🙂

    1. shellymona says:

      The more depends upon reader’s interpretation…I am glad that you liked it….thank you Radha

  5. Step to heaven and feeling so good reading this beautiful story:)

    1. shellymona says:

      Liked your lovely comment …I’m glad you liked the post…thanks

  6. TateFarmGirl says:

    These are the best types of dreams. They stay with you throughout the day like a special secret:)

    1. shellymona says:

      They say life is a dream, but we think it as real…so why not that dream which gives us immense joy… thanks very much

  7. Sheethal says:

    I could visualize those words. Beautiful!

    1. shellymona says:

      It’s a lovely comment….thanks

  8. Anu Dev says:

    Hey,I can so relate to your words.Being a shippies wife,nothing is beautiful then your beloved’s surprise home coming…

    1. shellymona says:

      A blessing in disguise though….I am glad you liked it….thanks

  9. Jyothi Nair says:

    Sometimes such dreams carry us through the day. They leave a smile on our face and a tune on our lips. 🙂 Well done. 🙂

    1. shellymona says:

      very true Jyothi… and our day is made…thanks for the lovely comment

  10. Shilpa Garg says:

    Seventh heaven… wow… that’s a nice take on the theme. Lovely story, enjoyed reading it! 🙂

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