Ugh…get rid of it!


Nella’s car went vroom as she entered her husband’s favorite restaurant,  she wanted to please him by arranging a romantic and surprise dinner after his hectic  week. As her car swooshed  in  the parking she saw Rex gushing out of the restaurant hand in hand with a man, but  was  rattled to see the man in fact was a sizzling girl dressed in trousers and jacket having a pixie haircut.

This post includes 5 onomatopoeic words…and is the part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda


6 Comments Add yours

  1. beautifully written and like the surprise at the end. A thriller well written:)

  2. Nice one! And I didn’t know it’s called onomatopoeic words…thanks for sharing…:)

  3. Rekha says:

    Good one. Short and crisp.

  4. mahabore says:

    Nice, short and crisp post conveying the point. Lovely take on the WoW prompt

  5. preethiprasan says:

    Short, to the point and great use of sounds 🙂

  6. That was quite the twist at the end! Great story!

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