Nella’s car went vroom as she entered her husband’s favorite restaurant, she wanted to please him by arranging a romantic and surprise dinner after his hectic week. As her car swooshed in the parking she saw Rex gushing out of the restaurant hand in hand with a man, but was rattled to see the man in fact was a sizzling girl dressed in trousers and jacket having a pixie haircut.
This post includes 5 onomatopoeic words…and is the part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda
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beautifully written and like the surprise at the end. A thriller well written:)
Nice one! And I didn’t know it’s called onomatopoeic words…thanks for sharing…:)
Good one. Short and crisp.
Nice, short and crisp post conveying the point. Lovely take on the WoW prompt
Short, to the point and great use of sounds 🙂
That was quite the twist at the end! Great story!