In bliss

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Jay is nothing without his wife Rhea.

Rhea, besides being a devoted wife and a loving mother of two teenagers, is the backbone of the whole household. Her home seems like a paradise on earth.

Two years back this paradise was mine…only mine; I was the soul of this family. How fast things change in this world? But I am too glad for my family which is as happy with her as it used to be with me.

Rhea my sweet little sister sacrificed her young dreams by marrying an elderly widower to fulfill her elder sister’s promises and responsibilities.

 

This post is written for 100 Words on Saturday

100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe
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24 Comments Add yours

  1. nabanita says:

    Wonderful post…emotional infact..

    1. shellymona says:

      we’ve seen these things happening in our society…
      Thanks for the comment…

  2. Wow. Not the ending I expected!

    1. shellymona says:

      thanks for the compliment!
      🙂

  3. aayeshahakim says:

    lovely! reminds me of the movie, ‘Bewafaa’. 🙂

    1. shellymona says:

      I see…thanks a lot for stopping by and commenting 🙂

  4. mahabore says:

    Really nice post, wonderful heartwarming emotions conveyed in just 100 words

    1. shellymona says:

      Thanks for the motivation….It’s really nice to be around you people… 🙂

  5. what an emotional post. and when narrated in first person the effect is manifold. matured writing.

    1. shellymona says:

      Thanks a lot Kalpana ….this means a lot to me when commented by a mature writer like you…

  6. menons129 says:

    Very beautiful sentiments expressed in the story. It is so touching and at the same time so inspiring.

    1. shellymona says:

      Your comments are truly valuable…
      Thank you very much

  7. Touching take on the prompt, Sheela:)

    1. shellymona says:

      Thanks a lot Vishal…

  8. pratikshya2 says:

    a very emotional write up..liked it…

    1. shellymona says:

      Welcome & thanks a lot…

  9. Shilpa Garg says:

    A fantastic story with an unexpected twist! 🙂

    1. shellymona says:

      Thanks a bunch!
      Glad you liked it…

  10. Very well written. The emotional ending was unexpected.

    There are quite a few real-life Rheas who sacrifice their own dreams to fulfil somebody else’s promises and responsibilities.

    1. shellymona says:

      Exactly…and they are the great souls… indeed
      Thanks a lot!

  11. Wow, there was a twist I wasn’t expecting. Brilliant! ♥

    1. shellymona says:

      Thanks a lot Kathy…

  12. obsessivemom says:

    Sad for Rhea. I wish she were a ‘loving’ wife too.

    1. shellymona says:

      Welcome….
      you are absolutely right…
      thanks a lot

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