The twist of life

1284_P_1355365069528Mike’s efforts to attract Angela were failing one by one. Though he was a popular student in the college, she never got fascinated by his effervescence because she had Ben in her heart since long. However, Ben had a feeling that Mike and Angela have a relationship, but recently he had known through some common friends that this link was one sided.

Angela was glad to find Ben interested in her. She now waited for the first step from his side. She was cent percent sure of Ben’s proposal on the prom night when she’d leave his heart ablaze with her new designer red evening gown.

sad-woman-sitting-david-spillaneFinally, that long awaited day arrived. Both were enjoying the time, suddenly Mike appeared and asked her for a dance. Though she was not willing, she went with him, leaving her clutch on the table.  When she was back, Ben abruptly left the party. Feeling embarrassed she tried to call Ben to have a clear talk, but as she picked her clutch, she was shocked to see a letter under it. It read…”thanks, Angela for wearing red on my demand and announcing your true love for me….Hugs and kisses …Mike.”

She felt pale and stale. Anger, fear, confusion and failure made a questionnaire for her to find the answers of this twisted situation….

Concluding part of the story is here

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9 Comments Add yours

  1. I feel there is more to this story 🙂 How will it all end? Are you planning a sequel?

    1. shellymona says:

      Thanks a lot Shailaja….if this is so… I may try….:)

  2. Indywrites says:

    What a twist….but now I want to read what happens next.

    1. shellymona says:

      Though the prompt demanded such scenario….I think it’s a good idea to extend it a bit.
      Thanks very much

  3. And what happened? Want to know more about the trio…

  4. Damn!! Some men. What next ???

  5. Shilpa Garg says:

    Some men can be so jerks!

  6. Rajlakshmi says:

    That’s so sad… Off to the next part

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