Dazzling Desire #AtoZChallenge

Coffee Time Tales- Fiction 55/drabble

Festive-promotions and crowded-shops were driving Jia crazy, but her savings weren’t enough. What was the desire of a 21 year old?

She decided something and determinedly went back home.

Next-day she asked for advance salary of four months; it was her confidence or her luck, she got it.

Triumphantly she purchased her desire which was driving her crazy. On reaching home, she shouted with excitement, ‘mom!’

Her mother’s heart  brimmed with pride on seeing that gift. It was a solitaire diamond-pendant that Jia had bought for her mother, to keep her father’s promise which he made  before he had left for the war.

My Theme is Coffee Time Tales- Fiction 55/drabble
We all are story lovers and more than that we love to understand the emotions and feelings hidden behind those stories.
All stories carry a message, but how that message works in everyone’s life is yet another story!
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10 Comments Add yours

  1. Stella says:

    A sweet story of a sweet daughter! I can imagine how her mother would be bursting with pride 🙂

    1. shellymona says:

      Very true Stella! Bursting with pride!

  2. Vinitha says:

    That was sweet. Keeping her father’s promise with her hard earned money, that’s one lucky mom!

    1. shellymona says:

      Yes, lucky is the mother who has such a caring daughter! Thanks for stopping by and commenting

  3. Shilpa Garg says:

    Aww! That’s so sweet and her mother is surely a blessed one!

    1. shellymona says:

      Yes, very true! Thank you

  4. swathishenoy says:

    That was so sweet and heart warming 🙂 The last line holds so many different emotions. Lovely 🙂

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    1. shellymona says:

      Thanks for the lovely comment

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